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MA Master of Leadership, Police Officer

A police officer from Los Angeles, a dedicated public servant, I am as comfortable working in the office as walking the beat. A compassionate and sensitive man, I have always struggled to do what is right, even though police officers sometimes have to directly face supreme difficulties in figuring o…

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PHD Philosophy, Mexican-American

My first choice for graduate study towards the Ph.D. degree is at XXXX University for a variety of reasons. I am especially interested in studying 20th century continental philosophy especially, and several professors in your program are experts in this area. I would also love to study philosophy ab…

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PharmD Pharmacy, African-American

A black man born and raised in America's deep-south, I am keenly aware of the value of advanced education in overcoming the stagnation which engulfs so many of my people. I try and straddle the moral fence of helping others only insofar as this does not limit my own ability to grow, lead, and prospe…

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PharmD, Cameroon, French & English

My interest in Pharmacy began around the time my daughter's teeth started to develop. I was concerned when my baby's first teeth were dark. My dentist told me that medication I had taken during pregnancy had caused this condition. I promised myself that I would learn more about medications, and thei…

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Accelerated MSc, OT, Occupational Therapy

Occupational Therapy (OT) is a logical progression for me as a person as well as for my career. Whilst performing work as a Home Care Assistant for Service Users in their own homes, providing personal care for the elderly and the disabled, I came to realize that my contribution was more than just fu…

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PHD Economics, African-American, Inequality

A young African-American man originally from Texas, now living in North Carolina, I am very mature at 28; dedicated and an enormously hard worker, I want to devote my life to the study of economics because of both my fascination with how the world works as well as my passion for economic research. T…

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Residency Ob/Gyn, Humanities Scholar

It was my senior year of college. Two of my close friends, my lab partner and his wife were about to have their first child After months of anticipation and two false alarms the day finally arrived Her membranes ruptured and she was four centimeters dilated. Nervous but excited we were led into labo…

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MSc Biology UK, Food Safety

Through studying A-level Applied Science my interest in science has deeply increased, recently I was under pressure to choose a course to study at university but I knew I wanted to do something in the scientific field particularly along the lines of biology and chemistry. Whilst researching various …

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Internship Equine Medicine, Surgery

Personal Statement for Internship in Equine Medicine and Surgery. I am a young man from Chile who currently lives in Ontario, Canada. I have two great loves in life, animals and the practice of medicine. Following in the footsteps of my father, a physician, I decided to devote my life to curing our …

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MA Masters SLP, Romanian-American

I am a young man who was born in Romania and raised in Queens N.Y. I want very much to become a fully accredited professional in the area of speech pathology because I think that this is where my highest calling in life lies. This is why I studied toward and completed by the way in which speech impe…

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Dual M.A. Women's Studies & MSW

I am a young woman from Tokyo, who has lived in Michigan for the last 13 years, after having lived and studied in Japan for four years, with one in Brazil and five in Texas. I am writing this letter on behalf of my application to the MSW. Women's Studies Dual Degree Program at XXXX University. I hav…

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MSW Masters Social Work, Geriatrics

Doing graduate work in the area of Social Work is for me a long culmination of service to the Lord and my fellowman. I feel that I am a strong candidate to your program because of the many valuable experiences and privileges of social service that I have had. I want very much to become a more skille…

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MSW, Family, Older African-American Woman

I want very much to attain an MSW Degree from the University of XXXX so as to better prepare myself to continue my career as a mental health and substance abuse specialist in the greater Washington XXXX. This will help me to achieve my long-term goal of some group homes for the mentally ill and mild…

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MA Political Science, Former Soviet Republics

I was born and raised in Chisinau, the capital city of Moldova, one of the 15 former republics of the USSR. Now 29 years old, I locate the beginnings of my interest in politics at the age of 13 when the USSR dissolved and we found ourselves set half free; Russian troops remain in the country until t…

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MSN Nursing, Explaining Low Grades

I am a young, happily married Christian mother of three beautiful babies and I love my work as an RN. I have developed a special interest in Ortho-Neurological Medicine and spend most of my spare time reading about scientific and technological developments in this and related areas. I take great pri…

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Medical School, Canadian Army

Still only 21 years old, I have worked towards the goal of becoming a doctor for the last several years. As soon as I became serious about this decision, I began volunteering a few hours a week at the East York General Hospital near my home: feeding patients, assisting nurses and other staff, and he…

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Medical School, Shadowing Physicians

Experiences and defining moments shape who we are to become. Moments in time, like when a small-town medical doctor diagnosed my little brother with bacterial meningitis, catching the disease just in time and saving his life, have left me in awe of the medical profession and what it is capable of do…

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Residency in Surgery, Indian Surgeon

Surgery was my dream long before it came to be real life in medical school. I had begun to appreciate the enormous scope and depth of the field of medicine while still a very young man and my suspicions have been confirmed. The vastness of what we have still to learn refreshes my spirit and inspires…

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Residency Pediatric Dermatology

I hid behind my mother and asked myself, “Do I dare look again?” In all of my six years, I had never seen such an unusual looking person. In front of me stood a lady with white hair and ghostly pale skin flecked with scattered brown spots. Why did she look like that? If she was truly my mom’s sister…

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Residency Trauma Surgery

I am a young man from India who grew up in Montreal, Canada. I have worked for many years towards the goal of becoming a surgeon and I count myself especially fortunate to share the world of medicine with my wife, who is also Indian and a physician. She is currently in a residency program in Interna…

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