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Residency in Pediatrics: Chinese Applicant

I was asthmatic from the age of five and was hospitalized on a number of occasions. I observed the world and the adults in it as only a child can. I could see that some doctors and nurses did their job but no more, they cared for me and the other children but other staff also clearly cared about me …

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Medical School, Korean ICU Nurse

 

I was a small, premature baby and, although my medical problems were not severe, they did involve frequent visits to hospital in my early childhood.  So I became used to the environment of a hospital and observed the staff in the way that only a child can. I saw that some nurses and doctor…

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Residency Diagnostic Radiology: Saudi Woman

I am a Saudi woman born in Canada, raised and trained in Saudi Arabia and now residing in Chicago. I hold a first class MBBS degree awarded by the King Abdul-Aziz University, Jeddah. My goal is to undertake a residency in Diagnostic Radiology, sub-specializing in Interventional Radiology, in Canada …

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DDS Admission Application, Asian Woman

What first fired my interest in dentistry was suffering an accident two years ago that resulted in a fractured jaw. I required extensive oral surgery and became interested in the work undertaken to repair the damage done. During the process, a close relationship developed with my surgeon and I have …

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PHD Economics, Latin America & China

My language skills—near native in French, advanced intermediate Spanish, and several years of German and Chinese—are only matched by my dedication to the studies of economic development, especially in Latin America and China. I look forward to dedicating my life to the study of sustainable economic …

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Master’s Linguistics, Applicant from Ghana

In my home country it is not at all unusual for a pupil, who is excelling in their work, to be asked to assist in teaching their fellow pupils. As a pupil who did excel and who was, indeed, usually top of the class throughout my school career, I had considerable experience of teaching and also at un…

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MBA Business Administration, Medical

Growing up in a traditionally Saudi family, I pursued a career in which a woman would be afforded a greater amount of respect and mobility within the community. Dentistry was an excellent outlet for my compassionate nature, and I excelled in the sciences and mathematics. Even as a little girl, I alw…

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MS Computer Science and Engineering, Canada

For over ten years, I have stayed on a direct course to computer science and engineering in my education and in my work. More than this, growing up in Iran and going for undergraduate education in Computer Science, I knew that with each new day of research and study I would be getting closer to brin…

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Medical Residency in Anesthesiology

As I approach the end of my medical school education, I find that my thoughts often shift away from the formal material that has been my life for over three years. I have spent countless hours learning anatomy, conceptualizing physiology, practicing physical exam skills, and developing differential …

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Accelerated MSc, OT, Occupational Therapy

Occupational Therapy (OT) is a logical progression for me as a person as well as for my career. Whilst performing work as a Home Care Assistant for Service Users in their own homes, providing personal care for the elderly and the disabled, I came to realize that my contribution was more than just fu…

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Residency Pathology, Psychogenic


Why has been a primary motivation since I can remember, from the time I first became interested in the workings of the human body to the present, as I stay current with changes in medicine as a family practitioner. Growing up I found human anatomy and physiology fascinating. The first year of medi…

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Residency Plastic Surgery, Cosmetic


First, I came across a newspaper article describing the lives of many orphans in China who were abandoned by their parents because they were born with congenital defects like cleft lip and palate. Several weeks later, friends returning from China corroborated this harsh reality with vivid first-ha…

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Residency Pathology, Chinese


I was born in Northeast China's Jilin Province, the so-called Manchuria region in the past. It remains an economically underdeveloped region at present. My family was rather impoverished when I was a child. My uncle and aunt devoted great attention to my education. They could hardly make their end…

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