I now have a very strong background in English literature, at least for a young Iranian woman, and have even done some graduate work. But I have
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come to understand that the English Literature curriculum alone can not satisfy my intense thirst for helping poor women and their children. I am tired
of hearing Iranian women being described as chained creatures in need of sympathy. I desperately want a career that will allow me to help those who
suffer most drastically from the inequalities in our societies.
I have a good friend at XXXX University studying anthropology. Whenever I talked to her about my aims, she suggested Social and Cultural
Anthropology. There is no such program in any of the top Iranian universities. Furthermore, I dream of studying at an ancient and historical university
in the heart of the Europe and to learn more about history in order to become more familiar with European academic and professional abilities. I am
convinced, therefore, that XXXX is the most suitable university for my interests.
My short term professional objective is to pursue research and study in Social and Cultural Anthropology. And my long term objective is to be of
service to poor Iranian women. Thus, my main purpose for applying to study in your Master’s program is to both expand on my existing knowledge
and to create additional opportunities for myself in the future. I bring with me great zeal and enthusiasm to transform my ambitions into reality and I
envisage a career of pioneering research work and continuous contribution to my field of study. I shall consider myself most fortunate to be given a
chance to fulfill my aspirations at your university and I want to thank you for consideration of my application.
| Anthropology MA 1 (777 Words)--Iranian Woman |
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facilities and I was able to greatly develop my skills in poetry, handball, and painting. Here, I developed a keen
interest in Literature and Art. I received several awards for playing handball. My interests in Literature and Art,
especially, have inspired me to apply to continue my studies in Foreign Literature. By the time I was 18, I had
made up my mind to struggle to secure a seat in Foreign Literature and the admission into the Foreign Literature
program was a very challenging task since it is enormously competitive. I had to face KONKOOR (the national
level entrance examination) wherein only the top 2 to 3% of the 1.8 Million applicants are accepted My diligence
paid off and I was able to choose the major of my choice in one of the best free institutions near Tehran.
Throughout my bachelor studies, I have been concerned with human rights, especially for women. I am also very
concerned with the general, very high level of inequality in my society. I have felt compelled all along to
complement my studies in Social an Behavioral Sciences and Women’s Studies by getting closer and extending a
hand to poor women in deep trouble, working part time as a social worker for one year in very poor areas of the
Capital, teaching children. I loved helping them learn to express themselves and in this way liberate themselves
from some of their pain. I also helped to organize a benefit Art Exhibition to raise
money to help the earthquake victims in Bam.
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Social and Cultural Anthropology. I am convinced that my participation in your M.A. program will provide
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will be able to advance in my dream of helping Iranian women by studying them in their Diaspora, having left
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Social and Cultural Anthropology. I am convinced that my participation in your M.A. program will provide
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My long term goals include having the privilege of teaching anthropology, doing research and writing what is
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