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I have long been a very determined person and my dream of becoming a doctor has been my central driving force. I am a very
mature and emotionally stable individual and I feel that I am a strong candidate for medical school, in part, because of my positive
attitude and enormous dedication to my work, and how much I look forward to the rigors of this instruction. I look forward to
spending the balance of my professional life aiding in the construction of a more equitable and effective health care system here in
the U.S. and, perhaps, in the developing world as well. I am attracted to the idea of working some day on an international level
with an organization such as Doctors Without Borders. My dream is to be a positive influence and force in society by working to
improve the quality of health care in my community. I am a cosmopolitan young man who still visits relatives in Iran and is quite
familiar with international problems and issues, especially with respect to the Third World. I have also traveled to Holland, France,
the Caribbean, and most recently Costa Rica. I plan on moving to a Latin American country for an extended visit prior to beginning
medical school in order to further strengthen my Spanish skills, because it is very important to me to become an excellent doctor
in this language as well. I want to thank you for consideration of my application.
mature and emotionally stable individual and I feel that I am a strong candidate for medical school, in part, because of my positive
attitude and enormous dedication to my work, and how much I look forward to the rigors of this instruction. I look forward to
spending the balance of my professional life aiding in the construction of a more equitable and effective health care system here in
the U.S. and, perhaps, in the developing world as well. I am attracted to the idea of working some day on an international level
with an organization such as Doctors Without Borders. My dream is to be a positive influence and force in society by working to
improve the quality of health care in my community. I am a cosmopolitan young man who still visits relatives in Iran and is quite
familiar with international problems and issues, especially with respect to the Third World. I have also traveled to Holland, France,
the Caribbean, and most recently Costa Rica. I plan on moving to a Latin American country for an extended visit prior to beginning
medical school in order to further strengthen my Spanish skills, because it is very important to me to become an excellent doctor
in this language as well. I want to thank you for consideration of my application.
I am a 24-year-old Iranian man, born in Miami, where I lived before moving to Iran with my family at the age of 11. My parents
had almost always spoken to me in English, and Farsi was an uphill battle for me from the beginning. Yet, I am convinced that
these kinds of great challenges build determination and strength of character. This is perhaps one of the reasons why I am so very
highly motivated to become a physician. Medical doctors were my childhood heroes and greatest role models. I moved back to
Miami at the age of 17 and completed high school here. I now have a BS Degree in Biology with minors in Chemistry and Spanish
from the University XXXX, graduating in 2006, and last month, July of 2007, I completed my MS Degree in Biomedical Science
from XXXX University. My MS Degree is perhaps the single strongest aspect of my application. I found my anatomy lab
particularly fascinating and all of my studies to be excellent preparation for medical school. I always performed my dissections
diligently, trying to unveil as many structures as I could, often spending almost an hour looking for a particular delicate nerve or
vessel, when my group members would insist on moving to the next objective. Usually, I found what I was looking for. I am a
determined individual who, as a doctor, will never give up on his patients. I firmly believe that health is the most valuable blessing
one can receive, enabling us to enjoy our surroundings and find satisfaction in our accomplishments. This is why practicing
medicine will be such a great joy, the privilege of returning a sick person to health, restoring the happiness that has been lost to
illness, giving someone additional time to share with loved ones.
I have my heart set on becoming a surgeon; I am not yet certain which area of surgery I will wish to specialize, although I do find
Otolarygnology especially exciting. I am most attracted to the challenge represented by surgery and this sustains my determination.
The practice of medicine is my vocation, completely fulfilling my sense of destiny through service to others. I see surgery as both
an art form and a spiritual exercise, something that one constantly struggles to improve and further develop. I like hands on work
and interaction with patients and I want very much to spend the balance of my life treating patients. I admire and respect hard
work and the opportunity to confront profound difficulties and challenges and very much look forward to the rigorous character
of your medical program and its emphasis on research preparedness. Medicine is also where science and art come together for
me, and I keenly aspire to a broad based and thoroughgoing education in the scientific foundations of the practice of medicine.
had almost always spoken to me in English, and Farsi was an uphill battle for me from the beginning. Yet, I am convinced that
these kinds of great challenges build determination and strength of character. This is perhaps one of the reasons why I am so very
highly motivated to become a physician. Medical doctors were my childhood heroes and greatest role models. I moved back to
Miami at the age of 17 and completed high school here. I now have a BS Degree in Biology with minors in Chemistry and Spanish
from the University XXXX, graduating in 2006, and last month, July of 2007, I completed my MS Degree in Biomedical Science
from XXXX University. My MS Degree is perhaps the single strongest aspect of my application. I found my anatomy lab
particularly fascinating and all of my studies to be excellent preparation for medical school. I always performed my dissections
diligently, trying to unveil as many structures as I could, often spending almost an hour looking for a particular delicate nerve or
vessel, when my group members would insist on moving to the next objective. Usually, I found what I was looking for. I am a
determined individual who, as a doctor, will never give up on his patients. I firmly believe that health is the most valuable blessing
one can receive, enabling us to enjoy our surroundings and find satisfaction in our accomplishments. This is why practicing
medicine will be such a great joy, the privilege of returning a sick person to health, restoring the happiness that has been lost to
illness, giving someone additional time to share with loved ones.
I have my heart set on becoming a surgeon; I am not yet certain which area of surgery I will wish to specialize, although I do find
Otolarygnology especially exciting. I am most attracted to the challenge represented by surgery and this sustains my determination.
The practice of medicine is my vocation, completely fulfilling my sense of destiny through service to others. I see surgery as both
an art form and a spiritual exercise, something that one constantly struggles to improve and further develop. I like hands on work
and interaction with patients and I want very much to spend the balance of my life treating patients. I admire and respect hard
work and the opportunity to confront profound difficulties and challenges and very much look forward to the rigorous character
of your medical program and its emphasis on research preparedness. Medicine is also where science and art come together for
me, and I keenly aspire to a broad based and thoroughgoing education in the scientific foundations of the practice of medicine.
My mother’s uncle, Dr. XXXX, helped to inspire me. While practicing medicine in Tehran, he still found time to visit a nearby
village and to tend to poor people, often in his home, inviting extended families to spend several days with him, living and dining in
his large guest house with garden, treating them one at a time in his basement clinic, all free of charge. I aspire to a similar type of
service to others. My long term goal is to have a surgery practice in a suburban area, while devoting some of my time each year to
the service of the medically underserved. It has primarily been my dream of serving the medically underserved that has motivated
me to minor in Spanish and continue to spend large amounts of time increasingly perfecting my use of this language. I am someone
who celebrates America’s diversity and often communicates especially well with other multicultural individuals. I feel strongly that
knowing other languages and having the privilege of extended interactions with people from many cultures will help me to be able
to provide optimal treatment for members of these cultures who are my patients.
village and to tend to poor people, often in his home, inviting extended families to spend several days with him, living and dining in
his large guest house with garden, treating them one at a time in his basement clinic, all free of charge. I aspire to a similar type of
service to others. My long term goal is to have a surgery practice in a suburban area, while devoting some of my time each year to
the service of the medically underserved. It has primarily been my dream of serving the medically underserved that has motivated
me to minor in Spanish and continue to spend large amounts of time increasingly perfecting my use of this language. I am someone
who celebrates America’s diversity and often communicates especially well with other multicultural individuals. I feel strongly that
knowing other languages and having the privilege of extended interactions with people from many cultures will help me to be able
to provide optimal treatment for members of these cultures who are my patients.
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