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I want very much to attend the XXXX Medical School at XXXX University because I have always imagined that I would have the
privilege of spending my working life as a medical doctor, saving lives, curing ailments, alleviating pain, and contributing to making
life better for everyone with whom I engage professionally. In my experience working as a paramedic, I have had the experience of
pulling the sheet over the victim's head. The first time I did this I began to tremble. I had learned my first great lesson of medicine:
that for all its power, it cannot always prevail. I had experienced what is perhaps the most disheartening and demoralizing aspect of
the practice of medicine and faced it head on. I have also demonstrated that I know how to cope with life and death emergencies
with confidence, a confidence instilled in me primarily by my certification as an Emergency Medical Technician. I now have the
ability to take charge of a desperate situation and help someone in critical need and my experience as an EMT has reinforced my
decision to pursue medicine as a career.
Of course healing, curing, and saving lives is much more rewarding than trying and failing. As an EMT I have been exposed to the
satisfying aspects of medicine in a setting very new to me — urban medicine. I spent most of one summer doing
ride-a-longs with an ambulance company in Houston. Almost every call we received dealt with Latino patients either speaking only
Spanish or very little broken English. And, I suddenly realized the critical importance of understanding a foreign culture and
language in the practice of medicine, particularly when serving under-served, minority populations. In transporting patients from
the field to the hospital, I became aware of this community’s reduced access to medical care as a result of a lack of physicians able
to communicate with and understand their patients. I decided, therefore, to minor in Spanish. Having almost completed my minor, I
have not only expanded my academic horizons, I have gained a new sense of cultural awareness that I feel is indispensable in
today's diverse society.
Throughout my undergraduate years at XXXX, I have combined my scientific interests in medicine with my passion for Hispanic
culture and language. During my sophomore year, I volunteered at a medical clinic in the rural town of XXXX, Mexico. For one
month, I shadowed a doctor in the clinic and was concurrently enrolled in classes for medical Spanish. It was in XXXX that I
witnessed medicine being practiced as I imagined it should be: seeing the doctor treat his patients with skill and compassion, as
fellow human beings, rather than simply diseases to be outsmarted. I realized he was truly helping the people of XXXX in a manner
unique to the practice of medicine. Fascinated by my exposure to this very hands-on approach to clinical medicine, I was thrilled to
see medicine making such a difference in people’s lives. For me, the disciplines of Spanish and science have become inseparable,
and I plan to pursue a career in urban medicine that allows me to integrate the two. Later, I intend to practice somewhere in
California with a large Hispanic population.
I see medicine as a multi-faceted profession. I have witnessed its healing power, especially in rural Chacala, and I have seen its
weaknesses and limitations, facing death as an EMT. Inspired, in particular, by the Latino community of Houston, I realize the
benefits of seeing medicine from a holistic, culturally sensitive perspective. I want to thank you for consideration of my application.
privilege of spending my working life as a medical doctor, saving lives, curing ailments, alleviating pain, and contributing to making
life better for everyone with whom I engage professionally. In my experience working as a paramedic, I have had the experience of
pulling the sheet over the victim's head. The first time I did this I began to tremble. I had learned my first great lesson of medicine:
that for all its power, it cannot always prevail. I had experienced what is perhaps the most disheartening and demoralizing aspect of
the practice of medicine and faced it head on. I have also demonstrated that I know how to cope with life and death emergencies
with confidence, a confidence instilled in me primarily by my certification as an Emergency Medical Technician. I now have the
ability to take charge of a desperate situation and help someone in critical need and my experience as an EMT has reinforced my
decision to pursue medicine as a career.
Of course healing, curing, and saving lives is much more rewarding than trying and failing. As an EMT I have been exposed to the
satisfying aspects of medicine in a setting very new to me — urban medicine. I spent most of one summer doing
ride-a-longs with an ambulance company in Houston. Almost every call we received dealt with Latino patients either speaking only
Spanish or very little broken English. And, I suddenly realized the critical importance of understanding a foreign culture and
language in the practice of medicine, particularly when serving under-served, minority populations. In transporting patients from
the field to the hospital, I became aware of this community’s reduced access to medical care as a result of a lack of physicians able
to communicate with and understand their patients. I decided, therefore, to minor in Spanish. Having almost completed my minor, I
have not only expanded my academic horizons, I have gained a new sense of cultural awareness that I feel is indispensable in
today's diverse society.
Throughout my undergraduate years at XXXX, I have combined my scientific interests in medicine with my passion for Hispanic
culture and language. During my sophomore year, I volunteered at a medical clinic in the rural town of XXXX, Mexico. For one
month, I shadowed a doctor in the clinic and was concurrently enrolled in classes for medical Spanish. It was in XXXX that I
witnessed medicine being practiced as I imagined it should be: seeing the doctor treat his patients with skill and compassion, as
fellow human beings, rather than simply diseases to be outsmarted. I realized he was truly helping the people of XXXX in a manner
unique to the practice of medicine. Fascinated by my exposure to this very hands-on approach to clinical medicine, I was thrilled to
see medicine making such a difference in people’s lives. For me, the disciplines of Spanish and science have become inseparable,
and I plan to pursue a career in urban medicine that allows me to integrate the two. Later, I intend to practice somewhere in
California with a large Hispanic population.
I see medicine as a multi-faceted profession. I have witnessed its healing power, especially in rural Chacala, and I have seen its
weaknesses and limitations, facing death as an EMT. Inspired, in particular, by the Latino community of Houston, I realize the
benefits of seeing medicine from a holistic, culturally sensitive perspective. I want to thank you for consideration of my application.
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