JD (Law) and M.A. International Relations Dual Degree Program (1,482 Words)--Romanian Woman
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In a further search for additional opportunities to refine my ability to think from multiple perspectives, I studied abroad in Germany for one semester, with the IES
European Union Program. As part of the program, I visited France, Belgium, Luxembourg, Germany, the Czech Republic, Hungary, and Latvia, and was able to
meet with well-known ambassadors, diplomats, and political figures of these countries. These experiences also strengthened my goal to pursue a career in law, by
introducing me to different aspects of International and European law.
The University of XXXX at Eugene is my first choice for Law School because I want to practice International Law—hence, my interest in the joint JD/MA in
International Studies. I am also attracted to the department’s proactive spirit and proven commitment to community service as reflected by its multiple Oregon State
Bar Pro Bono Challenge awards. University of XXXX’s reputation of academic excellence and its resources also plays a big role in my law school decision. I
believe that your school and community will help me get out into the world, well prepared/primed and ready to offer my best in the service of others. I see the
University of XXXX as the best place to prepare myself to fight competently for the advancement of International Human Rights.
Volunteering is not only a passion of mine but also one of my daily vitamins for fulfillment. I have been groomed since infancy for service to others. Ever since I
was a small child, I remember spending Christmas day surrounded by orphans. Every year my parents and I would gather hundreds of presents and food supplies
for the orphanages in our city. Malnourished and living in abysmal conditions, the gratitude, smiles and unflinching optimism of these children will remain with me
always. While in college, I spent a year-and-a-half as a volunteer with The Campus Kitchen, cooking and serving food to the poorest members of the XXXX
community, mostly minorities. I also organized Food and Clothing Donation Drives around our campus and volunteered for the Feed My Starving Children
campaign. Honoring my roots and my people, I also spent 10 hours a week in the summer of 2004 teaching English and U.S. culture to children from Romania.
One of my significant goals in life has been to someday build a nursing home for unprivileged elderly citizens in Romania; this resulted from seeing many mothers
and fathers being abused, and thrown out of their home by their children. Following my graduation from college graduation, I returned to Romania and started a
campaign for financing and building a Nursing Home for 250 residents in my home town, Iasi. I established a budget, detailed plans, and began a campaign for
support, collaboration, funding and a search for land upon which to build. We hope to begin construction by January 1st, 2008. By volunteering I realized how
much I mean to my community, how much they need me, and how much I can do for them. These experiences have served to fortify me to fight for the rest of
my life against injustice, discrimination, hunger and poverty. Volunteering confirmed my goal of attending law school. I believe I can make a difference in this
world, and if I follow my vocation of becoming a lawyer, then I believe that I will have the most extensive opportunity possible to become an effective instrument
of progressive social change.
Following my college graduation, I came back to Romania and start working for XXXX Company, as a Vice-President of the Human Resources Department,
helping them to promote a new company image. As a VP of Human Resources, I implemented a new Employers Compensation Program, which focuses on
employers' needs outside of the workplace, primarily food, shelter, family, and education. As a result of this program, several company employers have returned to
college to finish their degrees. I also represented the company at different international Trade Fairs and Expositions, traveling in this capacity to Köln, Germany and
Tokyo, Japan, and participated at some of the biggest trade shows in the Chemistry Industry. While in Japan, in particular, I learned a lot about how efficiency,
precision and the importance of passion for one’s work, and I have incorporated these insights into my work in Human Resources. And great passion for work can
contribute greatly to a developing economy, such as Romania's. After my return from Japan, I implemented a new Human Resources approach based merely on
those three factors: efficiency, preciseness and great passion for work.
My long term goal is to some day work as part of a powerful network of attorneys that I help to organize, motivate, and direct; in this way I hope to make as
profound a contribution as I possible can to social change. I want to fight the scourge of corruption in public affairs and labor to foster good government and
public virtue, enhancing people’s access to health care, safety, education, and fair wages. Living under a brutal communist regime in my native Romania helped to
lay the foundation for my extremely high level of motivation to help others fight for their freedom and a life with human dignity. By pursuing a career in law, I am
following my vocation of making a better tomorrow for people today.
I believe that my enthusiasm, passion for justice, and eagerness to share my multicultural experience with others will make a difference in the law school
community. You will undoubtedly encounter many applicants bringing prestige to your institution over the years, but if you need a catalyst that will bring diversity,
effectiveness and leadership as well… I believe my contribution and commitment will make the difference. I want to thank you for consideration of my application.

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At the root of my desire to pursue a career in law, is an intense love and sense of connection with people all over the
world, and especially those in need of basic resources. This sense of connection and destiny that is so poignant for me
stems from my multicultural and ethnic background, global volunteering, and my working experience. I am a 23 year old
woman from Romania who feels strongly that I have already established an impressive track record of achievements that
makes me an excellent candidate for this competitive program. Experiencing some of the worst moments of the
oppressive communist regime, with little access to the outside world, I learned to be patient, constructive and creative,
and to seize the opportunity as it arises. I also learned how to exercise a deep sense of moral obligation to serve and help
others by participating in the struggle for freedom and peace with justice, an enormously profound passion was aroused
deep within me for seeing and experiencing the world of international affairs and relations.
Longing for contact with the outside world and to expand my educational experience, I left my home and family at the
age of 16 years old, and flew for the first time to the United States, as an exchange student. Embracing this challenging
opportunity, I successfully built a new life in Minneapolis where I have earned a B.A. degree from XXXX College in
International Relations with a special focus on International Business. Despite some catching up to do in English, I
graduated in only 3 1/2 years with a 3.81 GPA, Magna Cum Laude, which provided me with a solid feeling of
empowerment and direction. I have successfully adapted to a ‘melting pot’ of cultures and identities which I had never
experienced before, vast changes in my perspective on life, and this has helped me to open up my mind and see beyond
my own experience, increasing my desire to work in the international legal field.
While in college, seeking to broaden my educational experience and to take on new intellectual challenges, I worked at
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privilege of representing the law firm in a Small Court Case once, and won. After seeing the positive impact a lawyer has
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