| JD (Law) and M.A. International Relations Dual Degree Program (1,482 Words)--Romanian Woman |
| Law School |
The University of XXXX at Eugene is my first choice for Law School because I want to practice International Law—hence, my interest in
the joint JD/MA in International Studies. I am also attracted to the department’s proactive spirit and proven commitment to community
service as reflected by its multiple Oregon State Bar Pro Bono Challenge awards. University of XXXX’s reputation of academic excellence
and its resources also plays a big role in my law school decision. I believe that your school and community will help me get out into the
world, well prepared/primed and ready to offer my best in the service of others. I see the University of XXXX as the best place to prepare
myself to fight competently for the advancement of International Human Rights.
Volunteering is not only a passion of mine but also one of my daily vitamins for fulfillment. I have been groomed since infancy for service to
others. Ever since I was a small child, I remember spending Christmas day surrounded by orphans. Every year my parents and I would
gather hundreds of presents and food supplies for the orphanages in our city. Malnourished and living in abysmal conditions, the gratitude,
smiles and unflinching optimism of these children will remain with me always. While in college, I spent a year-and-a-half as a volunteer with
The Campus Kitchen, cooking and serving food to the poorest members of the XXXX community, mostly minorities. I also organized Food
and Clothing Donation Drives around our campus and volunteered for the Feed My Starving Children campaign. Honoring my roots and my
people, I also spent 10 hours a week in the summer of 2004 teaching English and U.S. culture to children from Romania. One of my
significant goals in life has been to someday build a nursing home for unprivileged elderly citizens in Romania; this resulted from seeing many
mothers and fathers being abused, and thrown out of their home by their children. Following my graduation from college graduation, I
returned to Romania and started a campaign for financing and building a Nursing Home for 250 residents in my home town, Iasi. I established
a budget, detailed plans, and began a campaign for support, collaboration, funding and a search for land upon which to build. We hope to
begin construction by January 1st, 2008. By volunteering I realized how much I mean to my community, how much they need me, and how
much I can do for them. These experiences have served to fortify me to fight for the rest of my life against injustice, discrimination, hunger
and poverty. Volunteering confirmed my goal of attending law school. I believe I can make a difference in this world, and if I follow my
vocation of becoming a lawyer, then I believe that I will have the most extensive opportunity possible to become an effective instrument of
progressive social change.
Following my college graduation, I came back to Romania and start working for XXXX Company, as a Vice-President of the Human
Resources Department, helping them to promote a new company image. As a VP of Human Resources, I implemented a new Employers
Compensation Program, which focuses on employers' needs outside of the workplace, primarily food, shelter, family, and education. As a
result of this program, several company employers have returned to college to finish their degrees. I also represented the company at
different international Trade Fairs and Expositions, traveling in this capacity to Köln, Germany and Tokyo, Japan, and participated at some of
the biggest trade shows in the Chemistry Industry. While in Japan, in particular, I learned a lot about how efficiency, precision and the
importance of passion for one’s work, and I have incorporated these insights into my work in Human Resources. And great passion for work
can contribute greatly to a developing economy, such as Romania's. After my return from Japan, I implemented a new Human Resources
approach based merely on those three factors: efficiency, preciseness and great passion for work.
My long term goal is to some day work as part of a powerful network of attorneys that I help to organize, motivate, and direct; in this way I
hope to make as profound a contribution as I possible can to social change. I want to fight the scourge of corruption in public affairs and
labor to foster good government and public virtue, enhancing people’s access to health care, safety, education, and fair wages. Living under a
brutal communist regime in my native Romania helped to lay the foundation for my extremely high level of motivation to help others fight for
their freedom and a life with human dignity. By pursuing a career in law, I am following my vocation of making a better tomorrow for people
today.
I believe that my enthusiasm, passion for justice, and eagerness to share my multicultural experience with others will make a difference in the
law school community. You will undoubtedly encounter many applicants bringing prestige to your institution over the years, but if you need a
catalyst that will bring diversity, effectiveness and leadership as well… I believe my contribution and commitment will make the difference. I
want to thank you for consideration of my application.
the joint JD/MA in International Studies. I am also attracted to the department’s proactive spirit and proven commitment to community
service as reflected by its multiple Oregon State Bar Pro Bono Challenge awards. University of XXXX’s reputation of academic excellence
and its resources also plays a big role in my law school decision. I believe that your school and community will help me get out into the
world, well prepared/primed and ready to offer my best in the service of others. I see the University of XXXX as the best place to prepare
myself to fight competently for the advancement of International Human Rights.
Volunteering is not only a passion of mine but also one of my daily vitamins for fulfillment. I have been groomed since infancy for service to
others. Ever since I was a small child, I remember spending Christmas day surrounded by orphans. Every year my parents and I would
gather hundreds of presents and food supplies for the orphanages in our city. Malnourished and living in abysmal conditions, the gratitude,
smiles and unflinching optimism of these children will remain with me always. While in college, I spent a year-and-a-half as a volunteer with
The Campus Kitchen, cooking and serving food to the poorest members of the XXXX community, mostly minorities. I also organized Food
and Clothing Donation Drives around our campus and volunteered for the Feed My Starving Children campaign. Honoring my roots and my
people, I also spent 10 hours a week in the summer of 2004 teaching English and U.S. culture to children from Romania. One of my
significant goals in life has been to someday build a nursing home for unprivileged elderly citizens in Romania; this resulted from seeing many
mothers and fathers being abused, and thrown out of their home by their children. Following my graduation from college graduation, I
returned to Romania and started a campaign for financing and building a Nursing Home for 250 residents in my home town, Iasi. I established
a budget, detailed plans, and began a campaign for support, collaboration, funding and a search for land upon which to build. We hope to
begin construction by January 1st, 2008. By volunteering I realized how much I mean to my community, how much they need me, and how
much I can do for them. These experiences have served to fortify me to fight for the rest of my life against injustice, discrimination, hunger
and poverty. Volunteering confirmed my goal of attending law school. I believe I can make a difference in this world, and if I follow my
vocation of becoming a lawyer, then I believe that I will have the most extensive opportunity possible to become an effective instrument of
progressive social change.
Following my college graduation, I came back to Romania and start working for XXXX Company, as a Vice-President of the Human
Resources Department, helping them to promote a new company image. As a VP of Human Resources, I implemented a new Employers
Compensation Program, which focuses on employers' needs outside of the workplace, primarily food, shelter, family, and education. As a
result of this program, several company employers have returned to college to finish their degrees. I also represented the company at
different international Trade Fairs and Expositions, traveling in this capacity to Köln, Germany and Tokyo, Japan, and participated at some of
the biggest trade shows in the Chemistry Industry. While in Japan, in particular, I learned a lot about how efficiency, precision and the
importance of passion for one’s work, and I have incorporated these insights into my work in Human Resources. And great passion for work
can contribute greatly to a developing economy, such as Romania's. After my return from Japan, I implemented a new Human Resources
approach based merely on those three factors: efficiency, preciseness and great passion for work.
My long term goal is to some day work as part of a powerful network of attorneys that I help to organize, motivate, and direct; in this way I
hope to make as profound a contribution as I possible can to social change. I want to fight the scourge of corruption in public affairs and
labor to foster good government and public virtue, enhancing people’s access to health care, safety, education, and fair wages. Living under a
brutal communist regime in my native Romania helped to lay the foundation for my extremely high level of motivation to help others fight for
their freedom and a life with human dignity. By pursuing a career in law, I am following my vocation of making a better tomorrow for people
today.
I believe that my enthusiasm, passion for justice, and eagerness to share my multicultural experience with others will make a difference in the
law school community. You will undoubtedly encounter many applicants bringing prestige to your institution over the years, but if you need a
catalyst that will bring diversity, effectiveness and leadership as well… I believe my contribution and commitment will make the difference. I
want to thank you for consideration of my application.
At the root of my desire to pursue a career in law, is an intense love and sense of connection with people all over the world, and especially
those in need of basic resources. This sense of connection and destiny that is so poignant for me stems from my multicultural and ethnic
background, global volunteering, and my working experience. I am a 23 year old woman from Romania who feels strongly that I have
already established an impressive track record of achievements that makes me an excellent candidate for this competitive program.
Experiencing some of the worst moments of the oppressive communist regime, with little access to the outside world, I learned to be patient,
constructive and creative, and to seize the opportunity as it arises. I also learned how to exercise a deep sense of moral obligation to serve
and help others by participating in the struggle for freedom and peace with justice, an enormously profound passion was aroused deep within
me for seeing and experiencing the world of international affairs and relations.
Longing for contact with the outside world and to expand my educational experience, I left my home and family at the age of 16 years old,
and flew for the first time to the United States, as an exchange student. Embracing this challenging opportunity, I successfully built a new
life in Minneapolis where I have earned a B.A. degree from XXXX College in International Relations with a special focus on International
Business. Despite some catching up to do in English, I graduated in only 3 1/2 years with a 3.81 GPA, Magna Cum Laude, which provided
me with a solid feeling of empowerment and direction. I have successfully adapted to a ‘melting pot’ of cultures and identities which I had
never experienced before, vast changes in my perspective on life, and this has helped me to open up my mind and see beyond my own
experience, increasing my desire to work in the international legal field.
While in college, seeking to broaden my educational experience and to take on new intellectual challenges, I worked at two internships as a
paralegal. The versatility and challenge of my work as a paralegal renewed my goal of attending law school. I am pleased, as a result of this
experience, to have become more responsible in my decisions and judgments, and this experience has helped me to better realize how much I
enjoy learning and challenging myself. I find the work of an attorney to be exquisitely challenging, stimulating, and generally gratifying. Every
day, I enjoyed researching new cases and figuring out the pieces of a new puzzle. I see becoming an attorney as assuming an enormous
responsibility and this helps to keep me focused and committed to what I am doing. During the internships, I drafted wills, prepared papers
for the Court, participated in clients’ interviews and meetings, experienced many cases in court, and even had the privilege of representing
the law firm in a Small Court Case once, and won. After seeing the positive impact a lawyer has on others lives, my desire to attend law
school and pursue a career in law became even stronger.
In a further search for additional opportunities to refine my ability to think from multiple perspectives, I studied abroad in Germany for one
semester, with the IES European Union Program. As part of the program, I visited France, Belgium, Luxembourg, Germany, the Czech
Republic, Hungary, and Latvia, and was able to meet with well-known ambassadors, diplomats, and political figures of these countries.
These experiences also strengthened my goal to pursue a career in law, by introducing me to different aspects of International and European
law.
those in need of basic resources. This sense of connection and destiny that is so poignant for me stems from my multicultural and ethnic
background, global volunteering, and my working experience. I am a 23 year old woman from Romania who feels strongly that I have
already established an impressive track record of achievements that makes me an excellent candidate for this competitive program.
Experiencing some of the worst moments of the oppressive communist regime, with little access to the outside world, I learned to be patient,
constructive and creative, and to seize the opportunity as it arises. I also learned how to exercise a deep sense of moral obligation to serve
and help others by participating in the struggle for freedom and peace with justice, an enormously profound passion was aroused deep within
me for seeing and experiencing the world of international affairs and relations.
Longing for contact with the outside world and to expand my educational experience, I left my home and family at the age of 16 years old,
and flew for the first time to the United States, as an exchange student. Embracing this challenging opportunity, I successfully built a new
life in Minneapolis where I have earned a B.A. degree from XXXX College in International Relations with a special focus on International
Business. Despite some catching up to do in English, I graduated in only 3 1/2 years with a 3.81 GPA, Magna Cum Laude, which provided
me with a solid feeling of empowerment and direction. I have successfully adapted to a ‘melting pot’ of cultures and identities which I had
never experienced before, vast changes in my perspective on life, and this has helped me to open up my mind and see beyond my own
experience, increasing my desire to work in the international legal field.
While in college, seeking to broaden my educational experience and to take on new intellectual challenges, I worked at two internships as a
paralegal. The versatility and challenge of my work as a paralegal renewed my goal of attending law school. I am pleased, as a result of this
experience, to have become more responsible in my decisions and judgments, and this experience has helped me to better realize how much I
enjoy learning and challenging myself. I find the work of an attorney to be exquisitely challenging, stimulating, and generally gratifying. Every
day, I enjoyed researching new cases and figuring out the pieces of a new puzzle. I see becoming an attorney as assuming an enormous
responsibility and this helps to keep me focused and committed to what I am doing. During the internships, I drafted wills, prepared papers
for the Court, participated in clients’ interviews and meetings, experienced many cases in court, and even had the privilege of representing
the law firm in a Small Court Case once, and won. After seeing the positive impact a lawyer has on others lives, my desire to attend law
school and pursue a career in law became even stronger.
In a further search for additional opportunities to refine my ability to think from multiple perspectives, I studied abroad in Germany for one
semester, with the IES European Union Program. As part of the program, I visited France, Belgium, Luxembourg, Germany, the Czech
Republic, Hungary, and Latvia, and was able to meet with well-known ambassadors, diplomats, and political figures of these countries.
These experiences also strengthened my goal to pursue a career in law, by introducing me to different aspects of International and European
law.
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with their Statement. This is because advanced study is so central to what they want for their future, and the future of their children. A well
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