| JD 1, Fighting Corruption and White Collar Crime, Weak Exam Scores, Young, Palestinian-American Man, 1.5 Pages, 481 Words, 2806 Characters With Spaces |
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I am looking forward to becoming a federal prosecutor for a host of reasons, foremost of which is my patriotism and my love
for law and order. After a great deal of reflection, I am confident that I have made the correct career decision. XXXX’s Law
School is one of my two ‘first choices’. I will attend your program if accepted.
I was born in America but I am Palestinian to the core and I am hoping, frankly, to be accepted by a program that likes the idea
of having a representative Palestinian (or two) in the new class. While I do not put much energy into international politics or the
Middle East, I am sensitive to questions of social justice and enjoy lively discussions with intellectual exploration and stimulation.
Generally speaking, I avoid adopting a position. Rather, I always seek ways to bridge divergent opinions, reconciling them
through the creation of alternative ways of characterizing the scenario in question. I have a legal mindset and I have grown
comfortable largely looking at life from a legal perspective. New York is home for me since I am from Brooklyn, and I like to
think of New York as the legal capital of the world, where theory is indeed cast into the caldron of practitioners. Law School at
XXXX is the perfect platform for my professional aspirations. I am highly motivated, disciplined, diligent, and analytical to the
extreme; yet I take the most pride in being compassionate, generous to others.
For me, the bad guys are white collar criminals who get rich through fraud, living off the backs of hard working people, robbing
them, stealing their life savings. I am concerned about corruption both in our society and within our government—on both state
and federal levels, but especially the latter; and I am fond of pondering theoretical constructions of what exactly ‘corruption’
means, and studying the extent of its prevalence. As a second generation immigrant Palestinian American, we were taught as kids
that school was not important because it was not really relevant to our sub-cultural norms of economic independence. I was put
to work at my father’s supermarket at the age of 12 to help earn money for my family. My father was murdered in this store and
I watched him die. Perhaps this has also motivated me towards law: conflict, its resolution through peaceful means. I am proud
to be Palestinian, to come from an immigrant family, and to have the satisfaction of struggling mightily for everything that I will
ever achieve.
My exam scores are not the greatest and I ask that you take my special circumstances into consideration. I have finally achieved
a level of economic security for my family, so that I can give my all to Law School, 24/7. My very spirituality is trained towards
become a lawyer and defending people from corruption.
for law and order. After a great deal of reflection, I am confident that I have made the correct career decision. XXXX’s Law
School is one of my two ‘first choices’. I will attend your program if accepted.
I was born in America but I am Palestinian to the core and I am hoping, frankly, to be accepted by a program that likes the idea
of having a representative Palestinian (or two) in the new class. While I do not put much energy into international politics or the
Middle East, I am sensitive to questions of social justice and enjoy lively discussions with intellectual exploration and stimulation.
Generally speaking, I avoid adopting a position. Rather, I always seek ways to bridge divergent opinions, reconciling them
through the creation of alternative ways of characterizing the scenario in question. I have a legal mindset and I have grown
comfortable largely looking at life from a legal perspective. New York is home for me since I am from Brooklyn, and I like to
think of New York as the legal capital of the world, where theory is indeed cast into the caldron of practitioners. Law School at
XXXX is the perfect platform for my professional aspirations. I am highly motivated, disciplined, diligent, and analytical to the
extreme; yet I take the most pride in being compassionate, generous to others.
For me, the bad guys are white collar criminals who get rich through fraud, living off the backs of hard working people, robbing
them, stealing their life savings. I am concerned about corruption both in our society and within our government—on both state
and federal levels, but especially the latter; and I am fond of pondering theoretical constructions of what exactly ‘corruption’
means, and studying the extent of its prevalence. As a second generation immigrant Palestinian American, we were taught as kids
that school was not important because it was not really relevant to our sub-cultural norms of economic independence. I was put
to work at my father’s supermarket at the age of 12 to help earn money for my family. My father was murdered in this store and
I watched him die. Perhaps this has also motivated me towards law: conflict, its resolution through peaceful means. I am proud
to be Palestinian, to come from an immigrant family, and to have the satisfaction of struggling mightily for everything that I will
ever achieve.
My exam scores are not the greatest and I ask that you take my special circumstances into consideration. I have finally achieved
a level of economic security for my family, so that I can give my all to Law School, 24/7. My very spirituality is trained towards
become a lawyer and defending people from corruption.
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way; but it is estimated that hundreds of thousands of students seek help each year with their Statement, because advanced study is so central to what they want for their future, and the future of their
children. A well written Statement often results in scholarship awards of tens of thousands of dollars—in other words, it is generally a good investment for both the long and short term, a win/win
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competitive and stay that way in the search engines. We here at www.statementsofpurpose.com, for example, are currently spending well over $2,000 a month in Search Engine Optimization (SEO) alone.
Thankfully, we are based in Nicaragua, the poorest country after Haiti in the hemisphere, and our SEO Team is also based in Nicaragua, where wages and the cost of living are very low. Furthermore, our
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