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The most important guarantee that you have that my service is 100% reliable, that I will be there for you to do all that I can to help you through this process in a timely fashion, is the fact that
I depend heavily on word of mouth recommendations to get additional clients. Many of my clients have been recommended to me by a friend or associate. People who are in the process of
applying to graduate school, generally speaking, also have friends who are more or less at the same point in their career development, your colleagues, people who you are graduating with
from your undergraduate program. If you are pleased with my service, then you may recommend me to your friends. Please rest assured that I will work to the full extent of my ability to make
your application as effective as possible. I am the only person providing this service who demonstrates his/her ability to you by writing the first paragraph of your Personal Statement of
Purpose free of charge and at no obligation. And I will be there for you throughout the process, to advise you and answer any questions that you might have concerning your application. Send
me anything and everything that you think might be helpful. I will look it all over, write the first paragraph, and then send you a bill. When you pay the bill, I will finish your Statement(s). It
is of critical importance that you let me know right away how long the Statement(s) should be since different departments have different length requirements.
Your Strategic Investment
The Statement of Purpose or Personal Statement is enormously important since it serves as a basis for admissions committees to choose between otherwise equally qualified applicants. My
clients and I work together as a team to produce the most effective Statement possible. Usually, if my clients have a resume, they send it to me. They also tell my why they want to study in
that particular field. I work with the rough draft that the client has written or, usually, submitted through my fillable form, using the information like building blocks, organizing and
rewriting it to be as effective as possible. As stated above, I need at least a very rough couple of paragraphs that provide me with basic information. Then I interview you by email and/or Yahoo
Messenger to the extent to which it is necessary, asking you relevant questions.You need to tell the review committee why you want to attend their program at that particular university.
Often, there is a combination of factors involved, the quality and the special focus of the program, as well as its location. Local area resources are sometimes very important. Many applicants,
for example, are already well established in the area where they apply to go to school.

You are competing against numerous other candidates; this is especially true with respect to financial aid. What you have to do, therefore, is convince the committee that for one reason or
another you deserve the position more than other candidates. Include in your rough draft anything that you think will help to bolster your argument that you are someone with an exceptional
moral/social character: professional experience, extracurricular activities, especially volunteer work, even hobbies. The other way to look at this is that the committee is searching for people
that they would like to have in their department, pleasant, interesting people. I believe strongly that they also like people who are generally interested in the welfare of others.

Graduate schools are very tied to numbers; your exam scores are the single most important factor, because they represent objective evidence of your qualifications. This is one of the reasons
why it is a good idea, in most cases, to apply to more than one school, usually at least three, and schools with a varied range of selectiveness. Thus, if you do not get accepted at your first or
second choice, at least you were accepted somewhere. The committee has to choose between many students with more or less good scores and this is where the Personal Statement comes in: it
makes the final difference. When forced to choose between two well qualified applicants with very similar exam scores, the committee will choose the student that they think has the most
creative ideas because they will see that student as most deserving of the opportunity. If your grades or exam scores are low, you should explain why (sickness, employment, etc.) and this is
done in your Personal Statement of Purpose.
I have a Ph.D from the University of Southern California in Religion and Social Ethics and a Master's degree in the same field from Indiana University. I also attended the
University of Illinois for one year where I taught in the Intensive English Institute. The photo on the right is of me at a party with some of my students (in the black T-shirt).
The following school year, I had the privilege of teaching in the Department of English Philology at the University of Barcelona in Spain. I have also taught at the University of
Southern California, Indiana University, and the National Universities of El Salvador and Nicaragua. I taught Business English at the Seoul National University of Technology
and Shin Heung College in South Korea (1997-98). For the last decade, in addition to helping clients with their Personal Statements of Purpose, I have lived and worked in
Central America, mostly Guatemala. These days, I dream in Spanish. Yet, I did not learn the first word of Spanish until my third year of graduate school. This illustrates how
graduate school can radically shape your life in patterns that you cannot forsee.
The Personal Statement of Purpose

The Personal Statement or Statement of Purpose is the single most important part of your application. While information on your past work is important, it is only relevant insofar as it
helps the admissions committee to better understand and appreciate why you want to focus on the problems that currently interest you. In other words, the admissions committee is
primarily concerned with learning about your current and future research interests and how they coincide, in other words, how the research that you have already done has prepared you for
the research that you want to do in the future.

A shorter Statement of Purpose or Personal Statement that is clearly written is generally better than a longer one. A Statement longer than one to three pages of normal type and normal
margin is generally considered less favorable than the recommended statement of shorter length.
A successful personal statement is a literate, elegantly written essay in which the student highlights her strong preparation for her intended area of study, articulates her planned area of
study and her goals after completing this study, and demonstrates her facility with current theory and practice in this area.

In other words, why do you want to go to biology? How have you prepared for graduate study thus far? What will you study when you are there? What theories and methods do you find most
congenial in terms of your area of study? With whom do you want to study, and why? Name the scholars you've found most inspirational or influential. You must state your reasons for
wanting to attend THAT particular graduate program. And finally, what do you plan to do with this degree once you earn it?
Writing Sample
In addition to a given university's application requirements, each department often has special or specific requirements, and this sometimes includes a writing sample from all applicants to
the MBA or Ph.D. Program. The admissions committees are looking for a Senior Paper, Honors or Master's Thesis, published paper, or comparable written work giving evidence of both
writing ability and the capacity for research, analysis, and original thought at the graduate level, and demonstrating the ability to use theory in relation to evidence. Papers originally written
in a language other than English must be submitted in English translation. Other things being equal, a short, effectively written sample is preferable to a longer sample. If you decide to
submit a longer sample, you should indicate which 10-12 pages should be reviewed by the admissions committee.

I would be happy to review and edit your writing sample as well as helping you with your Statement.
The two should be carefully coordinated and this can be one of the most important
features of my service
Multiple Drafts to Different Schools
At StatementsofPurpose.com, I work with many clients who are applying to more than one school. I have worked with clients who have applied to as many as 12 different graduate departments
at the same time. Those applying to around 6 or 7 schools are much more common. The other magic number appears to be three schools. And, one has to deal with the fact that, the more
schools that you apply to, the more one finds oneself stretching the truth a bit, telling each school, more or less, that this particular program is one's first choice, at least implying that this is
the case. This part is very important and the wording here needs to be subtle. I suggest saying something like: "I am convinced that X department at Y University is the best match for the
directions of my research interests and my very high level of motivation." I also recommend that you include one to three sentences detailing which professors you especially look forward to
studying under.
When you take into consideration the fact that I do each additional draft at only $20.00 each, and that I do a review not only of the department but also the faculty and their individual research
interests, my price is very economical and represents a very sound investment in your future.
No matter how many schools that you apply to, you MUST tailor each essay to each program. A general essay simply will not do. This is why my service of tailoring each draft to that
particular department is of such critical importance.
All I need is a couple of paragraphs of rough essay telling me who you
are and why you want to go to graduate school in Biology. A resume is
also very helpful. In addition, I send you several interview questions by
email or Yahoo Messenger, and I use this material as building blocks
to write your essay. I also like to visit the web site of the department
and university that you are applying to so that your essay is correctly
tailored to the particular program in question. It is of central
importance that you accurately describe your dreams and visions for
what you would most like to become professionally in the future. My
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Study in Biology: MS, Ph.D.
By Robert Edinger Ph.D.
School of Religion and Social Ethics
The University of Southern California (1995)
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what makes a Personal Statement of Purpose for graduate study as effective as
possible. Most recently, he has been reviewing this issue again with special
attention to  the area of Biology PHDs and MS Programs, having already invested
many years studying Law School, Medical School, etc. Graduate programs in
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the precise length limit for each of the schools to which you are applying, in either words or
pages and also spacing.  In some cases, I end up writing drafts of several different lengths, most
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I do not charge a rush fee. Rather, I struggle every day, 7 days a week, to give all of my clients the best and quickest service possible. My service has become quite popular
since the quality of my work is very high and my prices quite reasonable as compared with most of my competitors. As a result, along with the fact that I am a one-man show
and do all of the work myself from start to finish, I am able to provide prompt attention only to those clients who have already paid for my services. I almost always have a
backlog of well over one week for responding to those interested parties who have not yet paid my fee. This is especially true during my busiest months of the year
(September through March). In short, I attend to my clients in the order in which they have paid my fee here on my web site. After you have made your payment you will be
redirected to my thank you page, where you will be invited to make a note of my cell phone number so that you can get in touch with me with any further questions that you
might have. Please do not try to give me information about yourself that is relevant for your Statement over the phone since I need this in text form in order to include in your
Statement. But you can feel free to call me to verify when I think that I will be able to send the draft for your review, for example. After making the payment, if you think of
additional information that you would like to include in your statement and share it with me, please do so in an email message so that I will have that text to add to your file.

If your limit is in pages rather than number of words, the font can sometimes be reduced to 11 rather than 12 unless the directions specify 12. In a similar way, in some cases,
the spacing can be reduced if necessary to 1.5 rather than double, again, unless specified otherwise (at no extra charge). I will let you know if I think this is advisable in your
case. I use
www.paypal.com. If you pay now, and you are available tomorrow to answer my questions by email, then I can almost always complete your Personal Statement
of Purpose within 3 days from the time that you pay online, perhaps even sooner, just fill out the form with sufficient detail, and be sure to submit the information by clicking
on the "Send Feedback" button. Sending me a resume or CV is also very helpful. Please note that you do not need to register or open an account with paypal or become a
member of the service, all you need to do is follow the link next to the credit card icons that says 'continue' to pay with your credit card.
I can almost always send an initial draft for your review within 72 hours of the time that you make the payment here on my web site. The longer the
Statement, naturally, the longer it takes. If you are available to answer any interview questions that I might have by email, then I can almost always finish
your essay within no more than 3 days from the time that you make the payment on my web site and provide us with the information that we need. This is
one of the great advantages of my service, that I provide rapid, timely service without asking clients for a rush fee. If you want changes made to the
document that we send you, you must make the changes yourself if you want a free, final revision.
Otherwise, you must pay for the revision.
About 2 out of 3 of our clients are non-native speakers of English. If this is the case with you, please keep mind, that it is best for non-native speakers,
and/or those who were raised in non-native-English speaking countries, to leave some small errors, mistakes, or grammar that is different from the way that a native (American
for example) speaker of English might tend to say something, so as to heighten the authenticity of the Statement. I have heard it said by members of admissions committees
even about Statements by native speakers, that some level of error makes you look human rather than an essay that looks like it was “written by a machine.” In other words, it
is very much in your interests (and I am afraid at times that some of my clients do not believe me) that some of the grammatical constructions be such that they would not
have been written by a native speaker; sometimes, I try to preserve some of this non-native flavor since I am sensitive to this question of authenticity. These days in academia,
experts speak of “World Englishes,” Chinese English, Arabic English, etc. Thus, what I really think is in your best interests is to take the document that I send you and go back
through it making it sound more like it is in your voice in at least a couple of places, and do not worry at all about something not being grammatically correct. Unless you were
raised in a native-English-speaking country, some grammatical irregularity or peculiarity is called for. Generally speaking, I make it very close to U.S. native-speaker English,
perhaps leaving in some slight nuanced irregularities. I am unable to produce “World Englishes” I can only respond to them and edit them in a way that leaves some flavor of
your linguistic origins. In other words, the Statements that are corrected in your own way, in your own style, are more effective for admissions committees.
If your essay is
too perfect, it looks like you had help, which you have:
But you don’t want them to know that! I want to leave in some of your Japanese (or Chinese, etc) style, try and
make a bunch of small changes to the draft that I produce! Say things the way you would say them yourself in a few key places! You are not a native speaker and you want
your Statement to look like it was written by someone who was not a native speaker. What I send to you looks very much like an American native speaker wrote it, and if I
were to make any changes that you might think are called for on your behalf,
it would still look like an American native speaker wrote it. Admissions committees do not like
to be fooled
. You must have some Japanese (or Arabic or Spanish) English in the Statement or they may not admit you. Try and think of some Japanese (or French or
German) idiomatic expressions and then translate them literally, that is a great way to give the document greater authenticity. That way they will know that you really wrote it
because they will see how you are thinking in Japanese, Chinese, Spanish, etc.
I am proud to announce that the index page for this web site,  www.statementsofpurpose.com, now
has a Google Page Rank of 3 and it is anticipated that it will increase over the next several months
as I am in the middle of a very successful campaign to exchange links with other more or less
relevant sites. If you would be interested in exchanging links, then I am interested in forming a
partnership with you, no gambling, pornography, or pharmacy. Please feel free to link to my site
first and then notify me so that I can link back to you right away. I am in a campaign to trade links
with hundreds of web sites and I am asking for you to place a reciprocal link to one of the web
pages that I have that is most relevant to the themes found on your site. We just need to decide
which of the page themes are the most compatible with the themes of your web site, so that links
will be as relevant and, therefore, as valuable as possible.


Here, at
www.biologygrad.org, I am interested in trading links with web sites that have
some relevance to Business School. All that you need to do is copy the code below
highlighted in white, paste it into your links page, and send me the URL where the link can
be seen.

Dr. Robert Edinger

The link that I ask you to put on your site if you want to exchange links is as follows, along
with the HTML code:  

Title: Personal Statement of Purpose for Biologyl, MS, PHD
Description: Application Essay Help for Biology, MS, PHD

HTML CODE:
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Sample Help, Grad School, Graduate Assistance, Example, Public Administration,
Management, Finance, Economics, Accounting, MS</a>  

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Dr. Edinger is a historian of
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He generally publishes in
Spanish. This link is for one of
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Gender Studies dealing with
Pre-columbian Central
America:

http://hcentroamerica.fcs.ucr.ac.cr/cong/
mesas/cong5/docs/egen1.pdf
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We have a special focus with our service on character, creativity, and contribution to society. We think that it is important to portray yourself as a
diverse individual with cosmopolitan interests;
especially important here are international experience, travels, different languages spoken, written, etc. After all, this is the era of the global village
or global community. And no where is this truer than in graduate school. For our leaders of tomorrow, economic development through improved
technology and constantly improving ways of improving our world is about more than making money.

It entails making a contribution to the economic development of one’s community, locally or globally.  Those students who have both creative ideas
concerning the area in which they would like to specialize or for their long term goals or plans, simply have an edge. And those students who
demonstrate that they are caring people, sociable, agreeable and team players also have an edge. We develop the material that you submit into the
kind of essay where the admissions committee members feel like they already know you a little bit and look forward to meeting you in person and
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