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Your Strategic Investment
The Statement of Purpose is enormously important since it serves as a
basis for admissions committees to choose between otherwise equally
qualified applicants. Dr. Edinger works as a team with his clients to
produce the most effective Statement of Purpose possible. Usually, if our
clients have a resume, they send it to us. They also tell us why they want
to study in that particular field. We are also happy to work with the
rough draft of the Statement that the client has written along with the
information that you provide in your Interview, using the information like
building blocks, organizing and rewriting it to be as effective as possible.
Again, we need at least a very rough couple of a couple of paragraphs
that provide us with basic information. We can also interview you by
email and the telephone to the extent to which it is necessary, asking you
relevant questions.

We have learned that it is generally best to tell the review committee
straight up front why you want to go to their school in particular. Often,
there is a combination of factors involved, the quality and the special
focus of the program, as well as its location. Local area resources are
sometimes very important. Many applicants, for example, are already
well established in the area where they apply to go to school. You are
competing against numerous other candidates; this is especially true with
respect to financial aid. What you have to do, therefore, is convince the
committee that for one reason or another you deserve the position more
than other candidates. Include in your rough draft anything that you
think will help to bolster your argument that you are someone with an
exceptional moral/social character: professional experience,
extracurricular activities, especially volunteer work, even hobbies. The
other way to look at this is that the committee is searching for people
that they would like to have in their department, pleasant, interesting
people. We believe strongly that they also like people who are generally
interested in the welfare of others.

Graduate schools are very tied to numbers; your exam scores are the
single most important factor, because they represent objective evidence
of your qualifications. This is one of the reasons why it is a good idea, in
most cases, to apply to more than one school, usually at least three, and
schools with a varied range of selectiveness. Thus, if you do not get
accepted at your first or second choice, at least you may get accepted
somewhere. The committee has to choose between many students with
more or less good scores and this is where the SOP comes in: it makes
the final difference. When forced to choose between two well qualified
applicants with very similar exam scores, the committee will choose the
student that they think has the most creative ideas; because that student
most deserves the opportunity. That is why your Statement is so
important. A well-written Statement can also result in a large scholarship
award or a teaching or research assistantship.
Dr. Edinger has a Ph.D from the University of Southern California in
Religion and Social Ethics and a Master's degree in the same field from
Indiana University. He also attended the University of Illinois for one year
where he taught in the Intensive English Institute. The photo on the right is
of Dr. Edinger at a party with some of his students (in the black T-shirt).
The following school year, he had the privilege of teaching in the
Department of English Philology at the University of Barcelona in Spain. He
has also taught at the University of Southern California, Indiana University,
and the National Universities of El Salvador and Nicaragua, as well as
Business English at the Seoul National University of Technology and Shin
Heung College in South Korea (1997-98).
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Statement of Purpose
The Statement of Purpose is the single most important part of your application.
While information on your past work is important, it is only relevant insofar as it
helps the admissions committee to better understand and appreciate why you want
to focus on the problems that currently interest you. The admissions committee is
primarily concerned with learning about your current and future research interests
and how they coincide, in other words, how the research that you have already
done has prepared you for the research that you want to do in the future.

A shorter Statement of Purpose that is clearly written is generally better than a
longer one. A Statement longer than one to three pages of normal type and normal
margin is generally considered less favorable than the recommended statement of
shorter length.
A successful personal statement is a literate, elegantly written essay in which the
student highlights her strong preparation for her intended area of study,
articulates her planned area of study and her goals after completing this study,
and demonstrates her facility with current theory and practice in this area.

In other words, why do you want to go to grad school? How have you
prepared for graduate study thus far? What will you study when you are there?
What theories and methods do you find most congenial in terms of your area of
study? With whom do you want to study, and why? Name the scholars you've
found most inspirational or influential. You've chosen the schools to which
you're applying on that basis, anyway, haven't you? You must state your
reasons for wanting to attend THAT particular graduate program.) And finally,
what do you plan to do with this degree once you earn it?
Writing Sample
In addition to a given university's application requirements, each department
often has special or specific requirements, and this frequently includes a writing
sample from all applicants to the M.A. and Ph.D. Programs. The admissions
committees are looking for a Senior Paper, Honors or Master's Thesis,
published paper, or comparable written work giving evidence of both writing
ability and the capacity for research, analysis, and original thought at the
graduate level, and demonstrating the ability to use theory in relation to
evidence. Papers originally written in a language other than English must be
submitted in English translation. Other things being equal, a short, effectively
written sample is preferable to a longer sample. If you decide to submit a longer
sample, you should indicate which 10-12 pages should be reviewed by the
admissions committee.
I would be happy to review and edit your writing sample as well as helping you
with your SOP. The two should be carefully coordinated and this is one of the
most important features of my service
Multiple Drafts to Different Schools
At StatementsofPurpose.com, we work with many clients who are
applying to more than one school. We have worked with clients who
have applied to as many as 12 different graduate departments at the
same time. Those applying to around 6 or 7 schools are much more
common. The other magic number appears to be three schools.
And, one has to deal with the fact that, the more schools that you
apply to, the more one finds oneself stretching the truth a bit, telling
each school, more or less, that this particular program is one's first
choice, at least implying that this is the case. This part is very
important and the wording here needs to be subtle. I suggest saying
something like: "I am convinced that X department at Y University is
the best match for the directions of my research interests and my
very high level of motivation." I also recommend that you include one
to three sentences detailing which professors you especially look
forward to studying under.
When you take into consideration the fact that we do each additional
draft for as little as $40.00 each, and that we do a thoroughgoing
search of the faculty and their research interests in that particular
department, as well as the general resources of the university,
especially research and conference centers, this represents a very
sound investment in your future.
No matter how many schools that you apply to, you MUST tailor each
essay to each particular program. A general essay simply will not do.
This is why our service of tailoring each draft to that particular
department is of such critical importance.
All we need is a couple of paragraphs telling
us who you are and why you want to go to
graduate school. A resume is very helpful. I
would also like to interview you by email
after reviewing your material.
Let's work together as a team to create a
masterpiece!
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so as to tell the admissions committee why you are especially
compatible with that particular program, and this is often the
key to success. If you apply to 10 schools,  for example, we can
provide you with 9 additional drafts at only $40.00-$50.00 per
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investment on your part. Please be sure to confirm the precise
length limit for each of the schools to which you are applying, in
either words or pages and also spacing.  In some cases, we end
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because Dr. Edinger has spent many years
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otherwise. We will let you know if we think this is advisable in your
case. We use www.paypal.com. If you pay now, and you are available
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you, then we can almost always complete your Personal Statement of
Purpose within 3 days from the time that you make the payment here
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information by clicking on the "Send Feedback" button. Sending us a
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the great advantages of our service, that we provide rapid, timely
service without asking clients for a rush fee. If you want changes
made to the document that we send you, you must make at least
some changes yourself if you want a free, final revision.
Helping people with their Personal Statements of Purpose for
graduate or advanced professional study or residency is much more
than a way to make a living. It is also our spiritual expression and
social contribution. We like helping people and we are  proud of our
service to others. Even if you are unable to pay our fee, we
encourage you to fill out our interview form so that we can send you
the information to include while writing your own Statement.
Note: All of the anonymous samples that are listed on this site are
Statements that Dr. Edinger wrote several years ago. By now, all of
this material is likely to have been listed by academic and
commercial anti-plagiarism programs used by many admissions
committees to judge the authenticity of Personal Statements for
graduate and professional programs. (Two of the more prominent
of these efforts are www.turnitin.com and www.ithenticate.com)
These samples are listed here only to inspire you. If you use some
of this text quoted word for word, your application could be rejected
as at least partly plagiarized.
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We do not charge a rush fee. Rather, we struggle every
day, 7 days a week, to give all of our clients the best and
quickest service possible. Our service has become quite
popular since the quality of our work is very high and our
prices are quite reasonable as compared with our major
competitors. As a result, we are able to provide prompt
attention only to those clients who have paid for our
services. We attend to our clients in the order in which they
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