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Personal Statement of Purpose for the M.A. Program in Jazz Performance at The XXXX School of Music at XXXX College.
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I was born and raised in a small town named Yanai, in Japan. Growing up in a non-musical family, I was lucky enough to meet the Saxophone. Yet,
my view in music had been quite narrow, without knowing “jazz”. After graduating from Kurashiki Sakuyo University where I learned a great deal of
technique and general knowledge about classical music, I started teaching saxophone as an instructor for the Yamaha Corporation. It was one of my
saxophone students who opened me up to jazz music and showed me the many colorful ways to express my music. Jazz grabbed me immediately.
Consequently, I came to New York with a passion to learn to play jazz, even though the culture where I grew up had little to nothing of this musical
language. I attended the New School University, absorbing and developing my own voice in jazz and received my BFA in jazz performance. At 31, I am
now musically mature and fully adjusted to New York. I see New York as the capital of the Art World and the Musical Center of the universe. I feel
strongly that the XXXX School is the perfect match for my high level of motivation and the inspiring, creative dynamics of your faculty. I see it as the
place where I could give my all to our changing world of music and where I could become as creative as possible—it is the ideal academic environment
for Jazz.
When it comes to Jazz in New York, the XXXX School comes up a lot. I have visited the school and the vibes are explosive. I want to get the M.A. in
Jazz Performance because I want the title and the experience of being part of your academic community. I love making friends because they tell me
that I cheer them up and help to make them happy—this makes me play and compose as well. Now, I have become highly disciplined and I am looking
forward to learning a great deal more about Jazz than I already know. I look keenly forward to becoming a bookworm for the next couple of years. I
want to develop my own voice in jazz, composing as well as playing.
Being a Japanese jazz musician is challenging, especially because it is claimed that Japanese jazz artists “can’t swing.” It is here that I want to make
my mark in the art world, putting the swing into Japanese Jazz. I look forward to an extensive study of music in culture in your program, to help me
better understand how music is rooted in society and social psychology. It is true that Japanese people—and my parents are exemplary—consider that
it is a shameful to at least fully expose their expression. Jazz is music of exposure, which is difficult for my people. Thus, I see myself as a musical
pioneer dedicated to the quest of liberating Japanese Jazz. The Japanese people are fascinated with Jazz, and I want to go home some day and bring
the happiness, the unbearable lightness of New York with me to share with them.
.
I was born and raised in a small town named Yanai, in Japan. Growing up in a non-musical family, I was lucky enough to meet the Saxophone. Yet,
my view in music had been quite narrow, without knowing “jazz”. After graduating from Kurashiki Sakuyo University where I learned a great deal of
technique and general knowledge about classical music, I started teaching saxophone as an instructor for the Yamaha Corporation. It was one of my
saxophone students who opened me up to jazz music and showed me the many colorful ways to express my music. Jazz grabbed me immediately.
Consequently, I came to New York with a passion to learn to play jazz, even though the culture where I grew up had little to nothing of this musical
language. I attended the New School University, absorbing and developing my own voice in jazz and received my BFA in jazz performance. At 31, I am
now musically mature and fully adjusted to New York. I see New York as the capital of the Art World and the Musical Center of the universe. I feel
strongly that the XXXX School is the perfect match for my high level of motivation and the inspiring, creative dynamics of your faculty. I see it as the
place where I could give my all to our changing world of music and where I could become as creative as possible—it is the ideal academic environment
for Jazz.
When it comes to Jazz in New York, the XXXX School comes up a lot. I have visited the school and the vibes are explosive. I want to get the M.A. in
Jazz Performance because I want the title and the experience of being part of your academic community. I love making friends because they tell me
that I cheer them up and help to make them happy—this makes me play and compose as well. Now, I have become highly disciplined and I am looking
forward to learning a great deal more about Jazz than I already know. I look keenly forward to becoming a bookworm for the next couple of years. I
want to develop my own voice in jazz, composing as well as playing.
Being a Japanese jazz musician is challenging, especially because it is claimed that Japanese jazz artists “can’t swing.” It is here that I want to make
my mark in the art world, putting the swing into Japanese Jazz. I look forward to an extensive study of music in culture in your program, to help me
better understand how music is rooted in society and social psychology. It is true that Japanese people—and my parents are exemplary—consider that
it is a shameful to at least fully expose their expression. Jazz is music of exposure, which is difficult for my people. Thus, I see myself as a musical
pioneer dedicated to the quest of liberating Japanese Jazz. The Japanese people are fascinated with Jazz, and I want to go home some day and bring
the happiness, the unbearable lightness of New York with me to share with them.
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miss out because they do not know what is important to put into their personal statement—and what is not. And this can be expensive because universities are generally very wealthy institutions that give
away billions of dollars of scholarship money to graduate students—but only to those that have very well-written Statements. It is best to seek professional help and no one is better at this than we are.
They just charge more money.
Helping people with their Personal Statement or Statement of Purpose (different phrases for the same thing) is big business on the Internet. No one really knows for sure since it is not regulated in any
way; but it is estimated that hundreds of thousands of students seek help each year with their Statement, because advanced study is so central
to what they want for their future, and the future of their children. A well written Statement often results in scholarship awards of tens of thousands of dollars—in other words, it is generally a good
investment for both the long and short term, a win/win situation. As a result, there are now well over 100 services providing Personal Statement of Purpose assistance on the Internet and all have invested
huge amounts of resources in an attempt to become competitive and stay that way in the search engines. We here at www.statementsofpurpose.com, for example, are currently spending well over $2,000 a
month in Search Engine Optimization (SEO) alone. Thankfully, we are based in Nicaragua, the poorest country after Haiti in the hemisphere, and our SEO Team is also based in Nicaragua, where wages and
the cost of living are very low. Furthermore, our writing team is based in Latin America as well, Chile, Bolivia, Mexico, etc. For one reason or another, family, the beach, economic living, etc., all of our
writers choose to live primarily in Latin America; most are at least semi-retired. For the last five years, we have kept a paid announcement on www.google.com which only appears in Latin America (thus
making it affordable), www.statementsofpurpose.com/editing.html. With this add, over time, we have been able to find and maintain a team of North American (U.S. and Canadian) writers with advanced
degrees in a variety of disciplines: Law, Nursing, Public Administration, Education, Biology, etc. Most are retired but still young enough to enjoy helping others achieve their dreams. Most importantly,
they work for less than professional writers who live in the U.S. and Canada; it is primarily this that enables us to keep your cost down to a very reasonable price, because we pass this savings on to you,
the client. Finally, Dr. Edinger personally reviews and revises your Statement both before and after he sends it to you, assuring you of state-of-the-art quality.
Our prices are much more reasonable than our major competitors; www.accepted.com, for example, based in New York, charges $650.00 if you are willing to wait, and $850.00 if you are in a hurry. This
seems very ‘First World’ to us. We invite you to become part of a growing portion of those purchasing assistance with their Personal Statement of Purpose on the Internet who are very glad that they
turned to www.statementsofpurpose.com to take advantage of the great value of our full, interview based service with custom, key, strategic questions sent to you personally by Dr. Edinger. Most people
miss out because they do not know what is important to put into their personal statement—and what is not. And this can be expensive because universities are generally very wealthy institutions that give
away billions of dollars of scholarship money to graduate students—but only to those that have very well-written Statements. It is best to seek professional help and no one is better at this than we are.
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